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April 24, 2009

God Winks, Mind Blinks & Clarity of Character

I'm wondering just how long one bowl of soup can last. I'm writing in a local coffee shop today and across the way, within perfect earshot, is a truly annoying voice. Talk about distinct. And fast. And nonstop.

It belongs to a middle-aged woman who either had a couple of doses of Red Bull before she arrived or only has one hearing friend, the nodding woman sitting across from her who forgivingly keeps checking her cell phone.

Rather than pick up my laptop and move, however, I tune in. I listen to her run-on stories about continuing to pay her 25-year old daughter's credit card and about a college coed who got pregnant by a janitor. The woman dips her bread and fills her spoon and still the bowl remains mostly full. I want her to leave, but I don't.

For this woman has presented me with a gift: Clarity of Character.

I have been struggling with my protagonist lately. I understand who she is and what she wants and how she changes as the story arcs. Yet, she remains two dimensional. She's busy and challenged and flawed, but she's just a character, any character, bravely hurdling the obstacles I throw at her.

However, one constant remains. She is not distinct.

But the soup-eating woman is. She bounces in the seat as she talks, bobs her head for emphasis, leans way back when she laughs. She is visible and animated. She changes the pitch of her voice for the people she's quoting in her stories. And with each shift, her facial expression changes.

Don't get me wrong. I don't want my protagonist to be this woman -- no, I don't want my readers to hope for the soup bowl to drain. But I do want them to know, really know, my protagonist. I want her to be this extreme, this distinct.

After taking in her last spoonful of bisque, the talking woman leaves as abruptly as she came. And before the door even closes behind her, I click open a new document and let my fingers flip and flap across the keyboard. I define what kind of soup my protag would eat, with whom she'd eat it, and what stories she'd tell over it. In that brief amount of time, my blurred vision of her begins to clear.

I now know how she reacts when she receives difficult news. I can hear the changes in her voice when she talks with her patients or confides in her assistant. I see her facial expressions when she confronts her daughter or sips wine with her lover.

"She is real," I shout. "My protagonist is real."

There is a new book out by Squire Rushnell called When God Winks on New Beginnings.

I think writers experience these eye-opening God winks all the time. Only it's probably not fair to compare these clarity-of-character moments to divine gifts from above. Rather than "God winks", I like to call them "Mind Blinks." They are flashes of inspiration we receive when we spend enough time with our plots and our characters (and with our innovative nonfiction ideas, as well).

I'd love to hear about your own Mind Blink awakenings. When did you iron out that wringle in your plot point? Or what was the trigger that anchored the motivations of your protagonist? Your villain?

By sharing our creative experiences here, we might just trigger a Mind Blink Blast!

Hope so!

Judy

Posted by Judy at April 24, 2009 12:57 PM

Comments

I usually get Mind Blinks when I'm doing the most mundane chores like washing dishes. I think affording ourselves the freedom to not do anything constructive allows ideas to float to the surface of our mind.

Janice

Posted by: Janice at April 24, 2009 02:29 PM

Late in 2008, I was finishing up a script for my play, Freedom's Light: A Stop Along the Underground Railroad.

I'd gotten the main character, a pregnant slave who was attempting to escape to Ohio, in so much trouble that I didn't know how to get her out. I didn't want to back off the conflict and it took me days to realize that I could make her continuing escape make sense by giving an antagonist a personal agenda that more or less took his eye off the prize -- and ramped up the tension in another way.

As an FYI, opening night of Freedom's Light is a week from tonight!

Kelly

Posted by: Kelly Boyer Sagert at April 24, 2009 02:35 PM

I remember reading somewhere about the different methods of divinity and one of the ancient methods was that you pose your question in your mind and then take a seat among a group of people. In one of the conversations you overhear, there is your answer.

Also, I did like what was written in a "House" television episode recently. A minister who was in the hospital received a visitor and told House, this isn't a coincidence, it's God's way of beiny anonymous.

My most recent "wink" came to me in a dream. I had written a play but still needed something more to 'bring it all home' and it was given to me in the dream to put in another character, a woman that the main character loved. So I added the Spirit of his dead mother to speak to him.

Posted by: Millicent at April 24, 2009 03:43 PM

Janice, I had a similar experience when writing a children's story. I worked at the ending and worked at it, but I couldn't seem to find the surprise I needed. After a couple of weeks, I let it go. The answer came to me while cleaning the bathroom!

Wow, Kelly, Freedom's Light sounds absolutely wonderful! I wish you a grand opening and a full house. "Break a leg" to you and yours! Please let us know how it goes.

Millicent, I love the method of posing a question and allowing the answer to come to you in the conversations around you! I have never had a solution come to me in a dream, as you mention, but that's definitely what happens when you spend a lot of time with something! By the way, I LOVE House and have always believed as his minister visitor preaches: There is no such thing as coincidence!

Thanks for your interesting comments!!

Judy


Posted by: Judy Schneider at April 27, 2009 08:15 AM

I agree with Janice. Wasn't it Einstein who got his best ideas in the shower? In advertising, my art director partner and I always brainstorm over lunch. At some point we stall, and after so many iced teas I'm about to float away, I finally run to the bathroom. And it never fails, I always come running out with a new idea or sharper copy line.

I'm a firm believer in letting a problem stew on the back burner. Just yesterday, Judy and Janice were helping me brainstorm how to fix the slow beginning of my novel. We finally parted ways with me knowing what needed to be done but not how exactly I could pull it off. Then at 2 a.m. last night, I woke up with an idea how to make it work.

Posted by: Julie Long at April 28, 2009 05:23 PM

Julie, I love the whole team-brainstorming idea. It really works to bump thoughts around with people you know and trust. I know a guy (who knows a guy, etc.) who team writes for a soap opera in NYC. Is that the writer's dream job, or what? I think the team concept is why certain TV shows demonstrate such great writing!

I'm excited you have come up with a way to pull off the new beginning, Julie. Can't wait to read it!

Thanks!

Judy

Posted by: Judy Schneider at April 28, 2009 08:41 PM

Judy:

I'm glad to hear you are aggressively working on your protagonist because, as you already know, I am like the late, great Paul Harvey wanting to hear "the rest of the story." Good luck with it, and keep me posted. I seem to have mind blinks and other mental spasms either when I can't sleep at night OR when my brain is extremely overloaded and I am trying to concentrate on "something else." This brings me to a piece of advice: Always keep a notebook or something with you to jot down mind blinks and other bits of fleeting brilliance. Otherwise, as stellar as a thought might be, it can be lost forever. I can say this with authority since I'm closer to 60 than to 50 now. Keep that great story going, Judy--and good luck with it. mary

Posted by: mary at April 28, 2009 11:16 PM

Great advice, Mary! As a practice, I jot ideas and thoughts down as they come to mind. I carry extra index cards in the books I'm reading, in my purse and briefcase, and in my car. I also have a stash near my reading corner, by the kitchen TV, and, of course, on the nightstand. I'm still trying to work out how to jot notes in the shower (and be able to read them later). I've been known to write them in the steam. As an aside, I also do math problems in the steam, too, calculating projected word counts or time elapses in plot, etc.

Thanks for your comment, Mary! I'll send you a couple of chapters, soon!

Judy

Posted by: Judy Schneider at April 29, 2009 10:01 AM

Thanks, Judy! Tonight is opening night . . .

Posted by: Kelly Boyer Sagert at May 1, 2009 11:37 AM

Oh my gosh, Kelly, break a leg!! Please, please let us know how it goes!! Best to you!!

Judy

Posted by: Judy Schneider at May 1, 2009 10:36 PM

Hey . . . everything went really, really well with Freedom's Light. Most shows were either sold out or close to sold out and the actors were incredible!

Posted by: Kelly Boyer Sagert at May 24, 2009 01:45 PM

Wow, Kelly, I'm soooo excited to hear Freedom's Light went well. Sold out shows are a true sign of success. Now, you'll have to bring it to Pennsylvania! Congratulations!

Judy

Posted by: Judy Schneider at May 26, 2009 11:48 AM